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"Oh Dear" by ~CharlesA:iconCharlesA:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > People

©2006-2009 ~CharlesA
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Metric - Poster of a Girl

I'm trying to clean my lines, I guess this is the best I can do in two hours. I know the anatomy is sometime off (the reasts are too high, no pun) but it seems to work composition wise and, well, I'm not very good at forshortening. It is inspired by a daily deviation I saw in the bottom of my screen but which's name I can't remember.

I need to stop drawing girls maybe I am in the need of sex.

Edit: Big thanks to Crucian for pointing the problems. I hope it's better, the hand looks grotesque now but I kind of like it.

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~Miss-Fantasia Jan 6, 2006, 1:31:08 AM
Thats my body. lol


:orange: i like the angle you drew her in :orange:

PS Girls are fun to draw. No need to stop

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~Octophetus242 Jan 6, 2006, 1:35:38 AM
I really like your style. I'm a big fan of using few colors. Using only the blue white and black it really makes the woman stick out. It's a head turner for sure! /wink
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~phildesign Jan 6, 2006, 1:50:30 AM
omg! what is this! pretty cute :P realy nice style..!

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~Papayaman Jan 6, 2006, 12:04:23 PM
malaaaaaaaade!
pour le foreshortening, je sais pas, ça a l'air plutôt correct.
Et moi aussi je dessine juste des filles..
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~crucian Jan 6, 2006, 5:48:03 PM
Actually, I think it's just that her torso is too long between the bottom of her ribs and her waist. Also, the hand on the right looks like it's missing the chunk of flesh between the thumb and side of the palm. Seems like there should be some cast shadows on her side from that arm too. But yeah, the composition's pretty good, and it's interesting to see these lines from you.

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~CharlesA Jan 6, 2006, 10:31:08 PM
Thanks. Without the angle that picture wouldn't be interesting.

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~CharlesA Jan 6, 2006, 10:32:12 PM
Thank you, I use few colors only out of lazyness actually, but I pass it as "minimalism" or somethign like that.

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« J'habite pas dans un taudis j'mappelle pas j'viens tout seul m'a te mettre les points su'es "i" ou ben mon poing s'a gueule. »
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~CharlesA Jan 6, 2006, 10:33:13 PM
Merci! Moi j'aime toujours pas le racourci, mais ça fait du bien un mot d'encouragement.

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~CharlesA Jan 6, 2006, 10:36:38 PM
You are totally right, I only noticed the hand once I put the pic up there. As for the torso, well, now I see you're dead-on. I'll try to fix it. Maybe. Thanks for the comment on the lines, I fucking hate digital inking, so that one took quite a while.

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